红叶舞秋风，                                         
岁寒霜露重，                                         
家兄日畏寒，                                         
正忌熬严冬。                                         
                                                               
岭南似火炙，                                  
烈日当头红，                                        
闭门思避暑，                                         
不觉寒露中。                                         
                                                               
兄长思我时，                                          
叮咛防蚊虫，                                         
吾念兄长日，                                         
嘱咐御霜冻。