看到一首英文诗的翻译，觉得很烂，也许由于我英文差，或是东西方文化差异，或是我不解风情，我觉得原诗亦很烂，特古典诗词译一个。 原诗如下： 爱情比忘却厚 诗/[美]卡明斯 (e.e.cummings) 译/波波七品/亢霖 爱情比忘却厚 比回忆薄 比潮湿的波浪少 比失败多 它最痴癫最疯狂 但比起所有 比海洋更深的海洋 它更为长久 爱情总比胜利少见 却比活着多些 不大于无法开始 不小于谅解 它最明朗最清醒 而比起所有 比天空更高的天空 它更为不朽 Love is more thicker than forget Love is more thicker than forget more thinner than recall more seldom than a wave is wet more frequent than to fail It's most mad and moonly and less it shall unbe than all the sea which only is deeper than the sea Love is more always than to win less never than alive less bigger than the least begin less litter than forgive It's most sane and sunly and more it cannot die than all the sky which only is higher than the sky 古典诗词译一个。